This competition is always, as the name would suggest, for writing with an historical theme and this year it was the turn of fiction.
Our adjudicator, Suzanne Stirke, began by explaining that, when first drawn to pick up her pen, she had gone on a short writing course at Darlington 6th Form College. From there, she was encouraged to do a University Master’s course in Creative Writing as a mature student. Since then she has written and self-published two books set around Bedale, one about a particular building set in the early 1800s and the other about the resolution of a mystery surrounding that building set in modern times. She is now working on a third book about a local woman called Dorothy Patterson.
Suzanne went on to say what she was looking for in a short story:
- A beginning, middle and an end
- Must be concise
- No irrelevant detail (in a short story)
- Assume that the reader knows nothing
- Either 3rd person or 1st person narrative (she didn’t mention the rarer 2nd person narrative form)
- Not too many characters
- A good ending.
Turning to the seven entries Suzanne then made her comments on each. The entries were:
- ‘A Bedtime Story’ – Lotte Wilson – a grandfather tells two young boys a bedtime story based on his own memories
- ‘Departure and Arrival’ – Joe Peters – a young woman begins to travel the world
- ‘Great Aunt Tillie’ – Sheila Whitfield – June is sorting out belongings after the death of her husband
- ‘Private Tom Brownlea’ – Charles Lubelski – a story about a reluctant recruit in the First World War
- ‘The Big Decision’ – Peter Page – a young Irishman from the Dingle Peninsula decides to emigrate to America around 1900
- ‘The Fine Aroma of Coffee’ – Maggie Cobbett – a ghost story set in the York Castle Museum
- ‘The Star of the Sea’ – Susan Perkins – a story about a haunted pub beside the sea in Northern England.
Suzanne then announced the winners as follows
- Joint Second – Peter Page with ‘The Big Decision’ and Maggie Cobbett with ‘The Fine Aroma of Coffee’
- First – Lotte Wilson with ‘A Bedtime Story’
- Zomig 2.5 mg tablets
Suzanne presented Lotte with the trophy.
After the break, the remaining entries were paired with their authors and accompanied by discussion before Susan invited Lotte and Peter to read their stories.
Suzanne had brought along copies of both her published books for members to examine and there was just time for her to read the blurbs from the backs before the meeting closed with thanks being expressed to her for a much appreciated adjudication.
Due to circumstances beyond our control, Suzanne Stirke’s adjudication of the ‘Blast from the Past’ competition will now take place on Wednesday, 17th April.
Due to circumstances beyond our control, the talk on comedy writing by Swanwick Writers’ Summer School regular Phil Collins has had to be postponed.
That being so, the meeting on Wednesday, 20th March will now be for Members’ Manuscripts.
We hope to rebook Phil later this year or in 2025.
We welcomed Mary-Jane Holmes as our adjudicator this year. She had obviously put a great deal of thought into the task and did a very thorough job. Before announcing her decision, she read out each of the poems submitted and gave a detailed critique. A written version was also attached to each entry for the poet to peruse at leisure later on.
Charlotte Wilson (pictured above receiving the trophy from Mary-Jane) came first with ‘Pond Life’. Sheila Whitfield was in second place with ‘Inland Dreams’ and Kate Swann came third with ‘On the Scales for Grandad’. Mary-Jane congratulated everyone who had entered the competition. With a high standard overall, the great variety of themes and styles had made choosing the winners difficult.
After the adjudication, Mary-Jane answered questions about her own work and poetry in general.
From her bio: Mary-Jane Holmes wanders and writes in the wilds of Upper Teesdale. She has garnered many awards including winning the Bridport Poetry prize, the Writer’s Digest poetry competition, the Live Canon Poetry Pamphlet Prize, Bath Novella-in-Flash Prize, , Martin Starkie, Dromineer, Reflex Fiction and Mslexia Flash prize as well as the Bedford Poetry competition. She has been shortlisted for the Beverley International Prize for Literature and longlisted for the UK National Poetry Prize twice. Mary-Jane’s poetry collection Heliotrope with Matches and Magnifying Glass is published by Pindrop Press. Her pamphlet Dihedral is published by Live Canon Press and her novella Don’t Tell the Bees, is published by AdHoc Fiction. Her Lockdown poem ‘Letter from Baldersdale’ joins 20 other poems in the National Poetry Archive on their 20th anniversary. Her collection of Flash Fiction was published by V press in 2021 and was shortlisted for the Eyelands Literary prize in 2023.
Her work appears in a variety of publications including Aesthetica. Magma, Modern Poetry in Translation, Mslexia, The Lonely Crowd, Prole The Journal of Compressed Creative Arts, and in anthologies including Best Small Fictions 2014/16/18/20 and Best Microfictions 2020.
She has an MA (Distinction) in Creative Writing from Kellogg College, Oxford and has been awarded an Arts and Humanities Research Council studentship to complete a PhD in poetry and translation at Newcastle University. UK.
New Collection of Short Fiction: Set a Crow to Catch a Crow
Many of our members have attended ‘Swanwick’ over the years and Maggie, who sings its praises at every opportunity, is going to run a course there again in 2024. Booking is now open and she would encourage anyone who hasn’t been before to give it a shot. There are opportunities on the website every year to win a free place and that too has been achieved in the past by several RWG members. Details can be found here: https://www.swanwickwritersschool.org.uk/
Well done, Susan, for writing the star letter in the latest issue of Writing Magazine! That’s no mean feat and the prize will come in very handy.
Our final event of 2023 featured a buffet, a literary quiz devised by Peter, a Secret Santa and a wide variety of Christmas readings. As well as examples of our own work, there were chosen pieces by members’ favourite authors.
The star of the show was Sheila, a clear winner of this year’s President’s Cup, which Joe was very pleased to hand to her.
NB This was our last evening at the St Wilfrid’s Community Centre. From Wednesday 10th January 2024, our fortnightly meetings will be held in an upstairs room at the So! Bar at 6, Old Market Place. (Many will remember it as the former Black Bull public house.) Details will follow when this website is updated over the holidays.
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